| Silencewall is right, "Teddy Lupin" has a "Y". I see you've changed it to "Ted Lupin", but I don't believe he's ever called that in the books. Also, a minor quibble, but usually when someone has appeared in successive books, you use a hyphen (1-7, 3-5 etc). However, on Tom, Madam Puddifoot, and Gwenog Jones, they are done with commas. I know it doesn't really matter, but do you want to make it consistent? |