| For starters, 'Name the British Isles states' needs changing to something meaningful. We shouldn't need to input 'upon Tyne' and 'Kingston upon' according to convention. But mainly, the selection of what is included is very poor, e.g Darlington but not Sunderland or Middlesbrough, Sligo and Tralee, but not Derry nor Londonderry. I gave up when neither Birmingham nor any version of Stoke on Trent came up. Then, when I tried to see where it was all going wrong, I find the remaining answers needlessly obscured by exclamation marks. You need to start again with this and provide a source to make it worthdoing compared to the many others that have already been done along the same lines. |