Much better! I'd make "1841-1841" read just "1841," but otherwise I think it's spot on, except for a couple points I'd argue for "Political Opponents." First, I'd identify them as "candidates defeated in election" or something to that effect, since that's what they are. The points I'd argue are for Washington and Monroe. I'd start with Monroe, who ran unopposed in 1820, not vs. John Quincy Adams. And he was originally elected in 1816, defeating Rufus King. It would be fairer to say "Rufus King & Unopposed" for him. And for Washington, I would just say "Unopposed" or "N/A." He didn't exactly have an opponent in either election, both of which he won unanimously. But much better than the original version now. |