| The capitalization could still use some work. These words: "the", "to", "of", "for", "a", "in", "with", & "on" should not be capitalized. I was taught in school that articles and prepositions four letters and under should not be capitalized in titles, but I guess "over" is a bit of a toss up, since different sources (even Wikipedia) seem unsure and non-uniform. @arilicious: The white marks on the rock are supposed to be teeth, if that helps. |