| I'd encourage you to capitalize and punctuate as per the actual Preamble to the Constitution. For example, I believe People, Order, Union, Justice, Tranquility, Welfare, Blessings, Liberty, Posterity, and Constitution are all capitalized in the Preamble. And of course so is United States. Furthermore, the original Constitution in the National Archives in Washington, DC, uses the British spelling "defence" rather than the modern American "defense". Also, you have a typo: "our" not "out" before Posterity. I gave it 2/5, but would up that to 4/5 if changes are made. |