| I agree with tisyphone. Also, the correct spelling is "nephew," not "nephue," and it is confusing that some surnames need to be typed while others are omitted. Children should not all share one space; write son and daughter, or firstborn, second-born, etc. For the Scavo children, since there are twins, it's confusing as to whom to type first. In addition, you wrote "kids" for Katherine, even though she just has one daughter, Dylan. Rex Van de Kamp is NOT Bree's ex-husband; he is her LATE husband. (Therefore, I don't think you could call Phyllis an ex-mother-in-law.) A good idea, but needs a lot of work. |