| You have 'luky' instead of 'lucky.' You have 'call' instead of 'calm' three lines after 'witnesses.' The word 'night' should be in every chorus; "cool night air." You have 'cusion' instead of 'cushion.' You're missing the word 'sees' in the line 'who cares who sees what tonight.' Other than all that, good song choice. It's not a bad idea to cross-reference your lyrics with at least one lyrics site, and test your quiz before you publish it. |