| I think you should say "modified," "updated," "reworked," "revised" or even just "changed" rather than alienated. "Alienated" makes it sound like the song was abandoned, isolated, shunned or estranged.
I guess I'm guilty of poor word choice as well. Maybe "executed" wasn't quite right. I now understand your choice of lyrics to be used as hints, but initially it just seemed random and incomplete to me. Also, for some reason the lyrics split contractions in half. I don't know if that was something you did or something that just happened, but it's a bit awkward.
That said, I think this is an interesting revision of "figure out the lyrics." It's nice to have the little clues. |