| "In the land of Mordor where the Shadows lie" is repeated after "One ring to bring them all and in the darkness bind them". "Dwarf-lords" has a hyphen. "dark throne" isn't capitalized. "Three Rings" is capitalized. There should be periods in "In the Land of Mordor...", as you do that for the others. You need to take out 1 period in "One Ring to rule them all". The same thing that happened with the Land of Mordor happened on your last "One Ring...". There should be commas after each line, except for "One for the Dark Lord on his dark throne", which has no punctuation; "In the Land of Mordor where the Shadows lie" needs a period; "One Ring to bring them all and in the darkness bind them" has no punctuation either. Lastly, it's the "Land of Mordor", not the "land of Mordor". |
Fellowship of the Ring
One Ring (LOTR)
Finish the Rap Lyric
