| Well, It was cut off early anyway, so I would just say to cut it off a bit earlier by separating Mr. Cool, Mr. Right, and Mr. Know-It All. "Weird" and "conscious" are both spelled incorrectly (as "wierd" and "concious"), and there are a few other minor problems ("Of the plague the devoured humanity" rather than "of the plague that devoured humanity," and "Penny will see the evil in me" rather than "Penny will see the evil me"). |